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I very like your composition, the concept and some details you make with precisions.

The details I love : the grass is just very nice, really well done. The articulations of the girl are very good too. Her proportions are very good, and I like so much her hair. The little flowers that she is holding in her hands are very well done too :)

The general things I love : there is an intersting style, her face her attitude, the composition, the simplicity of some details, like the big flowers are background. The clouds are nice ;)

The things I "dislike" : I think your lines are too big, her face is not enough details, and there is not enough shades.

Here I am ^^ I hope I don't hurt you ^^"
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ArtisOneofThem Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hurt me? Ha, it'd take more than just telling the truth to hurt me!:)
I do agree witht the shading and face. They're okay enough, but in comparison to the rest of the face, they don't really match.
As for the grass and flowers, they only look so nice since those are brushes I got off the internet.
But thank you VERY much for your critique! I really appreciate it!:hooray:
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:iconserelyartworks:
SerelyArtworks Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ah okay, I was afraid ^^" Sometimes it could be hurting, so... If you appreciate I will continue to do this, I hope it will help you for the next ones ;)
PS : even I download sometimes some brushes, it does not help me : sometimes I don't know how to use it correctly... ^^
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ArtisOneofThem Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
As in, your photoshop doesn't allow them to work? Are you loading them correctly?
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SerelyArtworks Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sometimes, It's important to use them with less opacity, or with just one gesture, or anything else... But when I've try it, i was working on my God Ouros's fury, so I were not patient enough to do it well. It is not so easy to use!! :)
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ArtisOneofThem Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I see....I've little patience myself at times -- I just want it done, and done now!!
Well, just have patience, and you'll get a hang of using it! :):)
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